I thought it was well edited. Alot of your shots look liked they were from the same angle or maybe the final pkg just ended up that way. I know on my piece I just put up here I had the same problem. I didn't see it at the time but then I notice it now. I liked the fact that you through in nats of cars but the one that jumped out to me is the mechanic you had a cut away of him then you went out side to cars then back to him. maybe a tight shot of him checking oil, like the dipstick coming out or something along that line would have been nice, but thats just me being a back seat driver. Overall good pkg.