Gas Package

[msmucf]

Hey guys let me know what you think. I just shot the Reporter intro/tag and some of the traffic. But I cut it. So let me know what you think about the package.

http://www.flvideopro.com/dynotab.html

Thanks
Matt

 

[chicagoshootr]

Looked good, but wow, was that a VNR for dynotab or was it supposed to be a real news story?

 

[nguyen.jason]

I thought it was well edited. Alot of your shots look liked they were from the same angle or maybe the final pkg just ended up that way. I know on my piece I just put up here I had the same problem. I didn't see it at the time but then I notice it now. I liked the fact that you through in nats of cars but the one that jumped out to me is the mechanic you had a cut away of him then you went out side to cars then back to him. maybe a tight shot of him checking oil, like the dipstick coming out or something along that line would have been nice, but thats just me being a back seat driver. Overall good pkg.

 

[Rad]

I thought the editing needed to pick up the pace. I wanted more nat sound, especially ay the dynotab facility. I wanted to hear more sound at the gas pumps too... like the fuel nozzel going in the tank.

Tell me this is a VNR... I hope it's not a NEWS story.

 

[msmucf]

Yes it was a VNR, Thanks for the thoughts.

mechanic you had a cut away of him then you went out side to cars then back to him. maybe a tight shot of him checking oil, like the dipstick coming out or something along that line would have been nice, but thats just me being a back seat driver

I like the dipstick idea, and see where your coming from.

thanks again

 

[NEWSSHOOTER3]

Vnr

Yeah, it felt a lot like a commercial. I saw little news value, but it was pretty well shot. When I watched it, I felt it was at the level of what a good photographer should do, but the (audio) edits, especially on the cars, were a little loose.

It looked like it was a good day for shooting...