Well, that's easier to digest, sorry it took so long to get to...
Ummm... do you shoot on auto iris...? Just curious...
This was an alright story. There were a couple of minor sequences, but any sequence is rarely easy, so that's good.
I never really got a good perspective on how high the water was and the standup was okay, but I think some low angle (water level) shots may given me a better sense or perspective...?
A couple "quick hits" (sound) with the kids might have spiced this puppy up a bit... or maybe some kind of natural sound break(s)...
I'd imagine the shooting conditions were less than ideal, but I'm ALWAYS a fan of tight, Tight, TIGHT shots, and this is no different... maybe faces here... I never really got familiar with anyone or felt much emotion...
All in all, not a bad production... for what its worth, that's my .02...