redcoat
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[b-rollTV]1019[/b-rollTV]
[b-rollTV]1013[/b-rollTV]
-These are two versions of the same story explaining how high gas prices are motivating more people to consider 2 wheeled vehicles for transportation.
-The first one was written by the reporter and the second one is an alternate cut nat sound piece that I organized. I had so many leftover opportunities for nat sequences that I put this together for myself. The morning show producer liked it and ended up airing it.
-I'm curious if my version of the story did a worse, equal, or better job of telling the story when compared to the package. Of course, all other critiques in general are welcomed as well.
[b-rollTV]1013[/b-rollTV]
-These are two versions of the same story explaining how high gas prices are motivating more people to consider 2 wheeled vehicles for transportation.
-The first one was written by the reporter and the second one is an alternate cut nat sound piece that I organized. I had so many leftover opportunities for nat sequences that I put this together for myself. The morning show producer liked it and ended up airing it.
-I'm curious if my version of the story did a worse, equal, or better job of telling the story when compared to the package. Of course, all other critiques in general are welcomed as well.
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