Really good story and great shooting.....my only thing was I was waiting for the "hook".....and it never came. Or maybe if you had a better setup....I could get a better sense of Jorge's duality...he's a star football player but a great artist? Former gang member turned artist? Who is he? Thats the only thing I didn't get a sense for.....but great nats, great shot selection, you put your effort into that piece and it showed.