I thought your stuff was really good. You gave me a couple ideas on some quick edits. But one thing I would say, and I got this from another shooter here, is to let your sound breathe in and out a little before and after the video shows up. Like the nats of the bells in the second pkg to just let it ring out alittle more. Best way I can explain it is, its like when you hear a police car you can hear it first then you see it then it goes away but you can still hear it.