Nice work. Great job weaving nats into the story. It wasn't just a pop here or there, but a commitment throughout. For a day after parking lot story is is very well done.
One small thing. The shots of damage went by pretty fast. I think you could sit on them longer. In some cases they weren't up long enough to read. I know the reporter told us what they said in the track, but I'd like to read it for myself. Same with tire damage. I understand that you were trying to pick up the pace, but I think you could have left shots up a little longer just to let the viewers eye fully process what they are seeing.
Overall, very well done.