My First Post

[brighteyes]

Greetings everyone!!!

Let me know what you think of this story.

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The link is below.

http://www.b-roll.net/tv/view_video.php?viewkey=18cc404dec4a0ca88d4f

 

[Latin Lens]

Dude...really good job. The story had enough of a hook to keep me interested but you shot it very well....good nats....good variation...nice composition...overall A effort.

There was a couple of weird edits...semi-wide to painter and ladder next to mural...could be considered a jump cut....a little lacking in ultra tights but thats all I had a problme with.

 

[nguyen.jason]

I thought it was good man. I wouldn't change much at all. But i would do a folo once jan 20 hits

 

[brighteyes]

Thanks Guys!! I appreciate the advice and comments. And I would love to folo this one. I am attempting to convince my news director to send me with the South Florida High school band that will be in the inaugural parade. We will see.

Thanks

 

[NEWSSHOOTER3]

Smooth

Nice piece. A few more tight shots of the Mural might have helped. I also may have reversed the last two shot/sot's, for the wider shot, ending.

Overall, this is a really well shot piece.