Okay....I will try and be kind because I really want you to learn from what you posted here for us to critique. At first watch its not very good, but you had some good elements if you would have expanded or "saw" them better and used them to your benefit.
It also appears your a OMB? So there is difficulty in that plus you are in a small market so you are still learning. So with that said let's critique your wind turbine story:
I think overall you could've told the story better by setting it up in a better order. Nats of wind and tight shots of leaves blowing or dust from the ground off the top. Tell us how windy the city is then get into how this wind is fueling the turbines.
You need more shot selection and lose the still shots of the turbines. You could have got all you needed if you shot better...wide, medium, tights. Your standup was rough but again I understand since you're a OMB. Set up the camera and maybe a walk from inside the turbine through the door and end up outside would have been better.
Keep trying...its the only way you're going to learn is by making mistakes.