Its about that time again

Latin Lens

Latin Lens

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Jason....you are a fundamentally strong photog but I will tell you what I didn't like about this piece you posted and why it didn't work for me.

I can tell what you were going for....a preview to the event centered around a older woman with alzehiemer's and how her husband still loves her and cares for her. This is an excellent story....BUT I feel its hard to tell in a natpkg fashion. I think it needed a reporter track(s) to help narrate what is going on. I think its a hard to feel the true impact of this story without it....or honestly you could've done a better job of stringing bites together for a better flow.

This story was begging for artsy, tight, different angle shots to keep it fresh....again you are dealing with a emotional topic...the shot selection should reflect that.

Keep it up Jason...hope this helps.
 
nguyen.jason

nguyen.jason

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Ll

Your comments are always well taken LL. Thanks for the input. The story is just something that has effected many families, including my own. I guess what I was going for was just to get the awearness out there and give it a deep thought kind of feel, if that helps. I just wanted to make the general public think that, hey this is around and this is just a taste of what it really is like, and someday it might effect me. It also helped that the day it aired two elderly men got into a fight and one died over a blanket. To my knowledge the one didn't remember the fight.

Thanks man
 
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