Crime Story

[tvwcyj]

Hey it's been a long while since I have posted stuff on here... anyways I did a story Friday... Basic crime wrap.. we had alot of robberies and burglaries for our county. Anyways tried something done before but not by me... Anyways would love to hear from ya!

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[NEWSSHOOTER3]

Sterile

Not bad for a gas station SOT story. The push pins probably worked very well in your local area. That registered with people there. However, the lack of ANY nat sound made the whole thing very "sterile". Even the natural sound "bed" is important to the experience.

Nice job!