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Happy New Year,
Please critique my work so I can continue to improve.
I shot this almost four months ago. I tried to add some visual interest to a very static situation by varying the focus and using non-standard cropping. I don't know if those things would be acceptable for TV though I'm shooting for the company website. One thing is that I realized after it was originally posted was that I had too many wide to wide shots based on previous critiques here of other videos. I edited this down from 3 minutes to about 90 seconds. If you want to see the original version, it's here:
http://videos.cleveland.com/plain-dealer/2008/09/david_stephens_novelist.html
I look forward to your suggestions and comments. Thanks again.
Happy New Year,
Please critique my work so I can continue to improve.
I shot this almost four months ago. I tried to add some visual interest to a very static situation by varying the focus and using non-standard cropping. I don't know if those things would be acceptable for TV though I'm shooting for the company website. One thing is that I realized after it was originally posted was that I had too many wide to wide shots based on previous critiques here of other videos. I edited this down from 3 minutes to about 90 seconds. If you want to see the original version, it's here:
http://videos.cleveland.com/plain-dealer/2008/09/david_stephens_novelist.html
I look forward to your suggestions and comments. Thanks again.