Stand Up Feed backs please

[powens]

My name is Patrick and i am new to the foums here, I work in a small market 141, and would like some feed back on some stand ups. My news director sent out a email asking for creative stand ups in reporter pkgs. I feel i am being creative with how i shoot and edit y stand ups, but it seems the anchors don't like them.

http://www.12newsnow.com/category/177961/video?clipId=6545937&topVideoCatNo=177960&autoStart=true

http://www.12newsnow.com/category/177961/video?clipId=6553714&topVideoCatNo=177960&autoStart=true

http://www.12newsnow.com/story/16106963/burglary-call-leads-to-a-marijuana-bust

Thanks for any and all feed back
Patrick

 

[powens]

http://www.12newsnow.com/category/177961/video?clipId=6545937&topVideoCatNo=177960&autoStart=true

 

[Latin Lens]

Is it just me or is this post blank?

 

[cyndygreen1]

I'm seeing nothing.

 

[powens]

Sorry I tried to post a link to the stories
and it didn't post