Dude...nice story. Great job and overall editing. Just a couple things to help and maybe think about next time. Your intro shot was in the right place but I think because we are alluding to construction...its not wrong that its the car NAT but maybe had it been construction noise especially what happens after that intro shot with the group chant it woulda been more effectively. CAR NAT is fine...CONSTRUCTION NAT is better. Also just because you did a good job with pace...at the :30 mark its a long shot but maybe had you done some quicker edits showing hands working it woulda been a little more impactful with that part instead of staying on one long shot. Solid effort...good piece. Small things to make it better. Next time.