Nice Job
Yea, you worked your arse off on that. Good story. Being a former band geek myself it was nice to see the horns and drums get some attention.
I agree the two shot was not the best, but I understand what you were trying to do with it. Nice sequences and pacing through out. Saw a lot of feet during the indoor practice. Maybe change it up and do the same camera move (backing up while that march at you), but use a face or bell of a trumpet as the center of attention. That might reinforce the personal side of the story. However, that is being really picky. Good work on a four and a half minute piece.