first documentary, looking for feedback

Hey all, first off, I'd like to introduce myself. My name is Kris and I've been in the video business since 2006. I've had the opportunity to work with a national client who's kept me busy for quite sometime, but the same type of projects over and over again kept me from really growing as a producer and DP.

I recently had the opportunity to work with a really inspirational client who does motivational speaking and fitness instruction for kids.

The entire project took about 6 months to complete, which is quite a long time, but we needed to gather the b-roll and move through multiple rounds of edits.

Looking for any tips or constructive feedback for this documentary so that the next one I do I can continue to hone and improve my skills.

Thanks everyone!