Okay. Not the worst but definitely not the best either. It started off really well...good nats and intro but then, and I'm not sure why, but the nats got edited rough...there was quiet during the the river part and you should hear running water if you see it. So pay attention to the audio and the fading in and out...it helps a lot especially with loud noises...tease the ears as you fade in before your eyes see it and it'll have a more tremendous effect. Some video looked a little blown out...but not sure if that's the video player or your shooting...so just be careful if its you and your exposure...simple fix. I think that standup was rather subpar. Find ways to get the camera off your tripod so it forces you and the reporter to be more active and thus creating a better standup of show-n-tell. Also if you're jumping locations a lot...be sure to get landmarks or street signs or identifying things to help with the storytelling part both visually and writing-wise. Its the little things that will make a big differance sometimes but you gotta shoot them and use them in order to see that when you are in the edit bay.
