A fun spring story :)

Haha, what an awesome approach and great little story. The reporter's delivery was perfect. I guess my only real critique on this is the pacing...because you took an unconventional approach you probably coulda used some jumpcuts when removing winter clothes or things of that nature to help speed up the piece. It really woulda helped out cuz there was just a little lag time here and there but the ideas and thought to go into this route was great. Nice job however.
 
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