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Latin Lens

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What got into you on this on? Really? You guys obviously had a plan of attack and executed it very well...this story was not only entertaining but also informative...but you had access to some great nat oppurtunities and you used them very effectively. Kudos on this piece. Nice job. Couple things though...I noticed a few break the axis shots...but because the editing was fast paced it didn't really stand out but I noticed it because I am trained to spot that kind of stuff...just be careful with those. After all that buildup to get to the end...the closing was weak...why not pop the can and then just cut to a wide shot of it sitting there with some fizzing nats? That would have really closed better than going back to a food place. You see what I mean? But nice job with this...good pace...good structure.