cadencefilm
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so, just started a new job shooting long format stories after shooting nothing but the normal 1-2 minute general assignment pieces.
wondered if you folks could tear a few of my first pieces apart. i've received more positive than negative feedback from the newsroom, but there are some that mention (along with their positive feedback) that they think i chop report's track up too much.
(these should all be safari friendly)
"missing in plain sight"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=283421E8081793111077AD9D3D3482C0?contentId=6594964&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
"inflated promises"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=B5B507DAA6184E8868517D4FBF8E8E7F?contentId=6387449&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
"dangerous liaisons"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=D749AA39632E45170997479DB6227914?contentId=6552145&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
"graced with an amazing gift"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=AFE2452189B1A7E334850BA7FCE601EB?contentId=6522223&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
i know that's a lot of video and i'm not looking for a shot-by-shot breakdown (unless, you know, you're killing time with nothing better to do). just if they keep your attention, if they're watchable, etc.
thanks, greatly.
wondered if you folks could tear a few of my first pieces apart. i've received more positive than negative feedback from the newsroom, but there are some that mention (along with their positive feedback) that they think i chop report's track up too much.
(these should all be safari friendly)
"missing in plain sight"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=283421E8081793111077AD9D3D3482C0?contentId=6594964&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
"inflated promises"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=B5B507DAA6184E8868517D4FBF8E8E7F?contentId=6387449&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
"dangerous liaisons"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=D749AA39632E45170997479DB6227914?contentId=6552145&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
"graced with an amazing gift"
http://www.myfoxtwincities.com/myfox/pages/Home/Detail;jsessionid=AFE2452189B1A7E334850BA7FCE601EB?contentId=6522223&version=1&locale=EN-US&layoutCode=VSTY&pageId=1.1.1&sflg=1
i know that's a lot of video and i'm not looking for a shot-by-shot breakdown (unless, you know, you're killing time with nothing better to do). just if they keep your attention, if they're watchable, etc.
thanks, greatly.