Here's a quick pkg I did last night...it has a lot of national stuff but I figured I throw it up here anyway. Cut this one in 35 min. Let me know what ya think!
Yeah...not bad. You utilized your portion pretty well...however it is a rough one to critique only because of the national stuff that takes up a big portion. But anyways...good nats. Nice shooting. I would say it might have served the report better had you started off in the car and just to change it up get her walking the mall for something different so its not all the same looking...keeps your variety fresh. But good effort.