Not too bad considering the time crunch you had. Of course that's a shame because you coulda had some fun with this and gotten a really nice piece out of it. Saw some axis breaks...and shoot some more sequences so the editing doesn't look so rough...hide the fact that you're were slammed by working smarter not harder. Shooting sequences lets you edit sequences and really help out in a crunch. Standup was kinda weak and rather generic...even under stressful circumstances let your mind race on a good, creative, active standup. Your back was against the wall but you did well and pulled out a pretty decent piece. Nice job.
