jim sitton
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I had to go to hell and back for B-roll...
I had to go to hell and back for B-roll...
Bear in mind that I NEVER read anyone else's critique before I write mine...
As a Christian, first, I thought it quite disturbing to see a red cross behind your priest subject. What was the thought behind that? It almost, in my mind, cancels out ANYTHING he says...? Though I understand that I may, or may not, represent your audience...?
Beyond that, I enjoyed everything else, and the editing was quite "slick".
I too am a Christian (though not catholic) and I don't see any problem with a red cross. In my mind it represents the blood of the sacrifice that was made.
T Why would a red cross cancel anything said?
Now that I think about it, it should have been a Crucifix instead of a cross since he represents catholicism...
I dun know... it just distracted me too much and all I could think, and see, was the RED CROSS. Just a personal issue. It was a cool, and interesting, story none the less...
I saw a red cross in a stained glass church window the other day and all I could think of was you.
Please, stop Haunting me!!![]()
Jim, I love watching stories that remind me simultaneously how infinitely creative our craft can be, and how infinitely much more I have to learn!![]()
That being said, I wondered if you could explain your motivation for the effect you used about 3/4 of the way through the story that involved the trapezoid shape (am I getting the shape right?)? I liked where you went with it at the very end of the sequence, but when it first showed up I thought it was kind of distracting because I didn't really know why it was there or why I should be focusing on it.
And as far as the cross goes, I would have NEVER in a million years guessed that you freakin' MADE that out of cardboard! I wish I had the artistic know-how or confidence to start rocking a pair of box-cutters and card-board to make something as spooky and cool as that. And when you say you keyed a candle flickering on it, what do you mean by that? You're saying that it was a layered effect? Watching it I just thought that you simply had one of those red candles from your reporter's standup flickering just below it.
Overall I thought it was siiiick. Job well done.