Ravers have high hopes for day two of this weekend rave. I worked a weekend shift and turned a deadline story that turned out not too bad. There were video restrictions but we worked around them. I had a great reporter...good gameplan...wish I could have put a little bit a better ending but "thems the breaks". I usually critique in this forum but I am posting this to accept any and all critiques about this piece. By the way I wrote the first :30 secs of this piece because I like to get involved. Critique away.