this isn't much a critique but honestly i loved it! The only thing I may have changed was the back of the lady's head during the interview....once could be ok but twice was just a tad too much. But what a great pkg! Hold long did you have to shoot/edit and were you by yourself or did you have a reporter with you? Again, great job!
ps loved the water coming out of the hose with the firefighter probably my favorite shot....looked like you used your shutter for it too....