nguyen.jason
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Round Two, Let me know what you think.
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I agree! This goes along with the personalization suggestion I brought up in your other post, Jason. He was the guy this package should've centered itself around. The surprise aspect lies in the fact that he's blind. I thought that part was pulled off well.I wanted to hear more about the blind guy! Future story??
I'll say this: the package didn't lose steam. You kept it running straight through to the end. Good job.Sometimes we cut long pkgs at our station. When I come into any type of situation, I just remember before every shoot to shoot everything I possibly can in the amount of time that I have and look for nats, and blast my ch 2.
Right. But while that's a point, it's not the story, if that makes any sense. Personalizing it makes it a story. In this case, there were too many people involved that didn't have to be (even the reporter with that uninformative stand-up).The blind guy is great, he's a story by himself, and I'll bring up that we should do another story on him. But the focus was having companies out source to this place where people with disabilities can do a job for less and still feel that they were apart of the society.
That's the million dollar question. I suggest you point the advice out indirectly by saying, "Check out all the great feedback I'm getting from the guys at b-roll.net!" Let her stumble upon it herself! Make us look like the criticizing jackasses instead of you.How do you suggest getting around that and trying to get a reporter to write to someone like James?
The crux of course is getting the reporter to go along with focusing on one guy. If you can; you can show some of the the other things the company does in small bits sandwiched between the main/blind guy.The blind guy is great, he's a story by himself, and I'll bring up that we should do another story on him. But the focus was having companies out source to this place where people with disabilities can do a job for less and still feel that they were apart of the society. They don't make much but they don't care about that.