Critique Please?

Corporate Management

Corporate Management

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Honestly, I don't have much to say about this...it was pretty good. The one part I didn't like was the second nat pop of the wind, but that's a small thing.

Other things I didn't care for were probably due to the reporter; the standup was too long, and I hate seeing the reporter in the video. I also wanted to hear more of that woman showing the damage to her house. She seemed comfortable being on camera, and I would've rather seen her do that than hear her in a traditional soundbite. Honestly, focusing the story just on her probably would have been my suggestion, and doing a separate VO or something, where the more factual details could've been explained. But again, that probably wasn't up to you.

I really liked the pacing of your editing...I could tell you were listening to the cadence of the voice track. Anyway, nice work.
 
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