Cooking In The Dark

Overall not too bad...had a nice flow and some cool gfx elements and animations to really help out with the storytelling aspect. I will say that I noticed every jumpcut and axis break you had and there were/are quite a few. I would say to remember that when shooting so you can avoid that entirely when editing. Only because you spent so much time inside the kitchen with them the video started to get boring. Change up...explore shots from all around the house inside and outside that you can see the action so you can use the variety to please the eye. Variety is key especially in a limited b-roll situation. Nice effort though.
 
Huh. Don't know why the station took it down. Of course, I can't find it anywhere's else for now. I've got it saved on an archive drive, so I'll upload again to YouTube or some such site.
 
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