CarBennly
Member
Can I get a few opinions on this piece?
http://www.wral.com/news/local/video/3022770/
Thanks everyone!
-Tommy
http://www.wral.com/news/local/video/3022770/
Thanks everyone!
-Tommy
Bridge Operator
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NEWSSHOOTER3
Well-known member
Enjoyable
Nice story. Not as strong as some of the others in this franchise. There were some "zoomy", rather unsettling shots in there that I did not like and some of his audio pops seemed a little random. But, you mixed it all up pretty well and gave us a nice moment, about a nice man, with a cool job. Well done...
Nice story. Not as strong as some of the others in this franchise. There were some "zoomy", rather unsettling shots in there that I did not like and some of his audio pops seemed a little random. But, you mixed it all up pretty well and gave us a nice moment, about a nice man, with a cool job. Well done...
Corporate Management
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There was a funky edit there where they were talking about his view...but otherwise, I disagree about the "zoomy" shots. I assume he was talking about the refrigerator, but I thought it was fine.
The only thing I wanted to see was a different angle on the bridge opening--from the bridge itself, or from inside a car. Though for all I know, he only opens that thing once an hour.
Anyway, this piece flowed well. The editing stood out to me, as you were, for the most part, breaking things up in the right places. Also, the reporter seems cool...his voice really suits the piece. I mean, he may be a total dick in real life, but he seems ok here!
The only thing I wanted to see was a different angle on the bridge opening--from the bridge itself, or from inside a car. Though for all I know, he only opens that thing once an hour.
Anyway, this piece flowed well. The editing stood out to me, as you were, for the most part, breaking things up in the right places. Also, the reporter seems cool...his voice really suits the piece. I mean, he may be a total dick in real life, but he seems ok here!