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Posted by motog
(777 days ago)
I thought the editing was better than the shooting. I know its sports and people are moving around but for things like bench press and broad jump a tripod would have helped out, but it keep my attention for 4 minutes. overall good job
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Posted by cadencefilm
(864 days ago)
nice job. i'm normally not one for sports pkg's, they always seem dry to me, but this one held my attention for the most part. as any producer in my shop'll tell you, i'm a loud, vocal advocate for letting a story go as long as it needs to (within reason) but i think this story could have benefitted with a minute cut out.
otherwise, my only other nitpick is a lack of extreme close-ups. you obviously broke your back shooting tons of great footage, but i would have liked to see a few more extreme close-ups, abstracting different body parts and muscles as they spring into motion.
otherwise, really solid piece, and you had the benefit of some decent writing to go along with it. paired with the editing, the writing was what hooked me at the beginning.
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