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Default Echo Taps - Veteran's Day NAT PKG

This weas yesterday's day turn for 5pm. Other people in this market go after politicians. Not me.

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Okay...first of all you did a great job of getting some nice shots and gathering nat sound...but I feel the story-tell was way off...once you got to the echo taps part I was way more interested in that part of the piece...the rest was kinda run-of-mill type veteran day stuff...I wanted to know more about the playing the echo taps...get to the why part...and back to the ending ceremony. So for me...the story is what didn't get done in my book. A quality effort that fell flat due to structure...but you got skills be proud of that part.
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