Was this for a news nat pak?
The music bed is way too loud. Drifting is about cars, and I can barely hear the cars. Sometimes I lose track of what your interview is saying because the music overpowers his voice.
Speaking of your interview, he was boring. Go spice him up by getting some crowd MOSs. "What's drifting? Why do you like it?"
Putting myself in the shoes of a non-motorsports-enthusiast viewer, throughout your video I never understood exactly what drifting is. Now, maybe he said it and I didn't hear him, but that's still a problem with the video.
This nat pak needed short, punchy descriptions. "Drifting? It's not about who crosses the line first. It's about who can keep their car sideways the longest and with the most style." I never got that succinct description, but instead was treated to a long rambling explanation by a guy who knows about drifting, but isn't very good on TV. Editing might have helped you there.
In any nat pak that covers a subject which is unfamiliar to people, you need to beat the viewer over the head, so to speak, with what the subject is about. What I mean by that is that if you do a nat pak tonight, you don't need a bunch of people repeating what trick-or-treating is because just about everyone knows. But in this case, you need to hammer home the idea that drifting is a sport, drifting is a sport about style, drifting is a sport where your style is judged by how long you can keep the car sideways (back this up with video of a car going sideways so people understand what that means), because most people don't really understand normal motorsports, much less a niche motorsport like drifting.
And I'd have liked a lot more nat pops of tires squealing and engines revving, and turbos spooling, etc etc.
BTW, calling it a new kind of motorsport is inaccurate. It's been around since the 70's in Japan, and since the 90's in the US.