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Rad

Rad

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I like a lot of the framing, a lot of the shots, good use of the Go Pro (i'm still trying to figure out how to use it!) and some decent nats. What I didn't really get was a purpose. What was the point. I wanted more beginning-middle-end. The piece just sort of stops.
 
cyndygreen1

cyndygreen1

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It probably needs a lead-in/on-camera intro. Something to set it up. I had students who played this game and know what it is. You have some great angles/shots and it flows beautifully. The problem is you need to lead your (unfamiliar) viewers into what you are showing them.
 
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slicedframes

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cyndygreen said:
It probably needs a lead-in/on-camera intro. Something to set it up. I had students who played this game and know what it is. You have some great angles/shots and it flows beautifully. The problem is you need to lead your (unfamiliar) viewers into what you are showing them.
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Tx for taking a look. It actually did have a lead in describing what it "was". I just posted the video without it..
 
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