"It's A Mess"

Latin Lens

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Michael...great start. You seemed to have captured the mess on this highway quite nicely. However, thru no fault of your own I do have to say that by the end it slowed down just a tad (right after the viewer pics) and the sotnats from the officer got a little repeatative. While you can't control or manipulate what he constantly probably was saying...it would've probably helped to have had him saying something else just for a variety and probably you shoulda found a way to bring the action that you did in the first back back in on the second half. But solid effort again....great spot news story.
 

NEWSSHOOTER3

Well-known member
Run of the Miller +++

Rock-solid. I think you took a run-of-the-mill traffic situation and made it an enjoyable news piece. The pace was outstanding, loved the shot variety, and the use of natural sound was awesome. We've seen these stories done since the dawn on tv news and what you did here was taking that story to the next level. Hats off to you for that. ;)
 
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