nikonjourno
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To everyone who saw the bad one before it was a fcp issue that I fixed. Replaced it with the original. Please give me some suggestions. Thanks!
Story about the revitalization of downtown Phoenix. It focuses on the efforts being put forth by the city, county, state and private sector to make downtown Phoenix once again a 24/7 destination.
All feedback welcome. I am a senior journalism student at ASU's Walter Cronkite School of Journalism and am looking for critiques to help me improve my work. I shoot, write and edit all of my packages for school.
Thanks in advance!
Jeremy
To everyone who saw the bad one before it was a fcp issue that I fixed. Replaced it with the original. Please give me some suggestions. Thanks!
Story about the revitalization of downtown Phoenix. It focuses on the efforts being put forth by the city, county, state and private sector to make downtown Phoenix once again a 24/7 destination.
All feedback welcome. I am a senior journalism student at ASU's Walter Cronkite School of Journalism and am looking for critiques to help me improve my work. I shoot, write and edit all of my packages for school.
Thanks in advance!
Jeremy
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